Tuesday, July 2, 2019

Teacher feedback


Main Idea

(YASIN is 15, living with his Mum until now.... Mum has met Robert and fallen in love.  Now YASIN and Mum are moving in with Robert. Robert has his own son SAIF who could not be more excited to welcome Yasin to the house and teach him about photography, positive thinking and the importance of an early morning jog.)


OPENING ARGUMENT SHOULD BE - 

YASIN  through the door to (Saruh) as Mum.

Yasin shouting etc

Saruh - 'open the door '

'I don't want to move in. You wanna marry him. You go live there leave me behing.'

Saruh

'You'll get to have a brother!' 
'I'm sure you two will have loads in common'

CHANGE THE SONG-

SAIF's JUNO SEQUENCE



Well respected man sequence- 


2 familys - oppositional -

Saif's charachter is quite light, comedic,



Angry punk kid - (YASIN)

Same SEQUENCE BUT PUNKY - DIFFERENCE MISE EN SCENE 


TITLES


WHAT HAPPENS WHEN HIS MUM MEETS HIS DAD 



The idea is based similarly to the concept of "step brothers" the film, however one of the siblings in this idea is not repulsed by the thought of having another brother but instead enjoys the idea of having one, whilst the other brother - not so much.  The idea for the family drama is based on two divorced parents with sons are getting together,  but the sons of the parents are total opposite in the fact that one wants a brother, whilst the other hates the idea.